That girl really likes oreos.
I do too, but seriously. XD

Great job, but you might want to change the rating to at least T.

wow... I read that and that was better than porn... I get into it so HARD...is unbelievable the writing skills to describe the minimum detail! awesome

That was a very interesting thread. There were moments where I was laughing out loud. Total fake out for the ending. I loved it. Best summary of a story that I've seen in a while:

"It's about a girl who is determined to get the last Oreo"