|Reviews for Chain|
| Augment3d Reality 10/9/12 . chapter 1
I do like how this links to "Crying a Dry River." It makes your writing like a concept album in some ways, which is very clever.
The alliteration of "coiling / curling" is very well done, especially with both words having the same "ing" ending too.
| True Talker 9/3/12 . chapter 1
I DON'T want you to feel this way. I CARE ABOUT YOU.