| Reviews for Limited Steps |
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Wingsoflinesia 9/9/12 . chapter 1Interesting idea. It sparks a lot of others. |
ghostmirage 9/4/12 . chapter 1A little grammar checks here and there: "Would bosses have worker(s) sit more..." "...how many step their employees had?" "Effect" is really "Affect" etc, etc... I like the idea, though. A little polishing and this could end up being something more. |
miilla 9/3/12 . chapter 1Haha, that's an interesting concept, no doubt! On my job I have to stand and wlak around for eight hours at a time, I really wish I could run out of steps so that I'd have an excuse to sit down. It is a funny and original idea and text! |