This chapter was a bit slow, but I really liked it, dunno why XD I really want to hear more of Moark. I hope next chapter will be his.

AWWWWWWWH i love it! :D YAY! :D cannot wait to read more! :D

:D SO HAPPY TO READ MORE! :D thank you, thank you, thank you! :D teehee please update again soon! :D looking forward to reading more! :D

Woah! that is trippy! :) i like it! :D looking forward to reading more! :)

Whew! So it took me a long time to catch up, but it was so worth it! This story is great!

Woah! :) this was awesome! :D cannot wait to read more! :D

I actually think this chapter was great, though, in my, opinion, Natalie feels too much tingling. Still, good work. Always enjoying it :)

this was an amazing chapter! i have a question, why wasn't Scorpio there with Natalie when the three guys were "attacking" her? Please update again, soon! :D

Ahhhhh, I am so addicted! :D ahaha love it! :) please update again, soon! :D

Oh, not a cliffhanger, please. That's so cheap.

Yeh, I'm too lazy to log in. Anyway, cool chapter. I'm guessing Moark is a key character in the story.

Keep up the good work! I have enjoyed reading this so far, and it was be nice if you updated new chapter soon. I enjoyed it very much.

I like how the story's going so far. And I think Leo is soooo cute :) There are still Stars missing, though. Where are they?

First story I read on this site, and I must say I'm not disappointed, though I'm still a bit confused as to what's going on. Anyway, good job.

Hey! I read your new chapter! Can't wait to see more!