|Reviews for Kari's Mistake|
| Partyrockanthem 9/12/12 . chapter 9
I have one suggestion you should make chapters longer.
| Nintendo Fan 101 9/6/12 . chapter 6
My kind of story!
| Lily94 9/4/12 . chapter 1
This is great! The Prologue works fantastically for an introduction and I liked the last line: 'This is the story of how my life changed...', it makes for a really good sense of tension and I just wanted to read the rest. Keep writing :)