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| Reviews for Kari's Mistake |
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  Partyrockanthem 9/12/12 . chapter 9 I have one suggestion you should make chapters longer. |
 Nintendo Fan 101 9/6/12 . chapter 6My kind of story! |
| Lily94 9/4/12 . chapter 1 This is great! The Prologue works fantastically for an introduction and I liked the last line: 'This is the story of how my life changed...', it makes for a really good sense of tension and I just wanted to read the rest. Keep writing :) |
