I honestly felt I was reading a classic here. BRIILLANT!

awww, this is cute. I love the story, and how you blend all the different religions together.

This was an imaginative story. I will admit, the story-within-a-story part was a little confusing on the narrative. It would probably work better if you condensed it and removed the dialogue of the rock and the drop of water. I like to think about how long ago this fable would have taken place. In Ancient Greece/Egypt, perhaps?