|Reviews for Dance With The Devil|
| Itli 3/4/13 . chapter 12
Uh oh, Ryan, watch out. Katelyn's going to start putting the moves on Cheryl. Plot twist. -snicker- Also, I'm going to lynch her by her spleen if she insults Billypie again. Psychology is DA BOMB. Did you know that MD's major is psychology? /fastfact.
Also, does my main bro Patty McPatterson know you're killing her? :c Poor, poor Patty McPatterson.
Also yay. A chapter. And I kept thinking that Olivia was going to be a vampire for some reason. :
| Shade the Viridescent 10/28/12 . chapter 11
Ahhh! How did I miss reviewing?! DDD:
Omg Ryan. That is rude. Rude rude rude. XD I love how Will handles it, too. Will, I love you, please never change. *heart*
Ahhhh they're getting along a little bit! :DDDD Gives me warm fuzzies.
And you are a fabulous author and I love your stories. So there. C:
Thanks for updating, chica! :D Please do so again soon!
| Itli 10/24/12 . chapter 11
William should be the star of every chapter.
And also Starbucks is gross so I don't know why you even like it.
And also French is ugly and who uses Blackberries? Stupid Ryan!
But I still like the chapter.
Wow Katelyn! You're such a good author!
| WritingWolf14 10/4/12 . chapter 10
Aw... Dont be sad! I loved this chapter and that is not jsut to make you happy lol. I really did. I was kinda hope Kate would agree to that 'date' with Ryan though lol. But its still good. I love the way you also described the Hyoid and for ppl who dont know what it is. I love discriptive stories like yours. I hope your feeling better too! Update soon! PeaceOut!
| Shade the Viridescent 10/3/12 . chapter 10
Aww, I'm sorry you're in a bad mood. *huggles*
ON THE BRIGHT SIDE THIS WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER SO THERE YOU GO
Ffff, this is getting so interesting! C': And I rather love how catty Katelyn is being. Like, seriously.
Lots of books? That part actually sounds cool. Just buying the biggest apartment and filling it with books? But then the paying in cash every month and being creepy at night is not as cool. D:
I have no clue what is going on anymore and it is fantastic. :D
Thanks for updating, chica Please do so again soon!
| Itli 10/3/12 . chapter 10
One day I'm going to die a mysterious death and people will think I'm weird because I have a lot of books. :( And also because I have a Canadian flag and a Canadian pillow and a Canadian suitcase and a Canadian photoalbum and a Canadian Law book, and also a picture of Jesus. :c
And I thought you promised William. -hmph-
But it's okay, because Katelyn's face is a stoic wall, which means I LOVE HER.
But not as much as I LOVE YOU.
Because that would be weiirrrddd.
Hey. Get out of your bad mood.
Before I beat you up.
With my LOVE.
| Shade the Viridescent 9/16/12 . chapter 9
Omg. I knew Carriedo was gonna die! :D
Also that bath sounds awesome and I am jealous. I want lavender scented bubbles and candles. D: It sounds so calming. Except the opening her eyes underwater bit. I can't do that. XD
Ahhhh what is happening in this story I don't know anything anymoorrrrreeeee! Thanks for updating, chica, and you should update soon so I can knooowwwww!
| WritingWolf14 9/15/12 . chapter 9
Great Chapter and description! Love it as usual! keep it up!
| WritingWolf14 9/15/12 . chapter 8
You do not loack anything. I like this chapter just as much as any of the others. It may be short but it had a lot of details on the case at hand and it showed how Kate and Ryan work so well together lol.
| Itli 9/14/12 . chapter 9
So I was just reading intently, and I was like, "woah this is intense." And there was Joey, and there was Ryan, and then they were dissing psychology. And then there was Katelyn and her bubble bath and rubber ducky submarine. And then... there was... REGINA SPEKTOR. And she's in love with your dawter and she wants to have her babies. And then I just couldn't handle it. How dare you. I'm wounded.
And also Katelyn Anne's a bitch! Katelyn Anne's a biittccchh -sing-
| Shade the Viridescent 9/11/12 . chapter 8
Things are happening. New things. :DDD
Dude. What just happened to Carrideo? I don't think he did it... It doesn't seem to fit.
Also, the bit about serial killers was properly chilling. They're really creepy, man. Especially the organized ones, or the psychopaths. Cuz they seem all normal and shit, and then-BAM. Like Norman Bates.
Pfft, you don't lack creativity :D I'm loving it right now, I'm so excited for the rest!
Thanks for the update, chica Please do so again soon!
| Itli 9/11/12 . chapter 8
woah. olivia! how dare you hit poor little pablo in the face like that. it's very unprofessional.
Also. " the killer has a penchant for dramatics and large bodies of water".
I know who did it, Katelyn.
I'm a murdererrrr. D:
| WritingWolf14 9/10/12 . chapter 7
Aww! Such a sad Chappie! So THAT'S what happened! Awwww! It wasn't his fault! Update Soon! peaceout!
| WritingWolf14 9/10/12 . chapter 6
Great Ch. Why you hate writing lol? your good at it! Great CH!
| WritingWolf14 9/10/12 . chapter 5
I didnt think this Chapter sucked. and Ryan has love issues lol. But I hope he didnt cheat on purpose and that he really is a nice guy and not as horny prev and He's just looking for someone to love so in doing that, he's just expanding his horizons by flirting with the girls at work and finds that Kate is probably the one he really really has felings for!
Also with Kate, Why us she a cold person to others? Is that just her personality or did something happen to her to make her that way? Im not complaining Im just curious and want to figure the two out lol!