It's still freaking short! It needs to be longer and with more emotion! Think of this as ur diary...would u just write about what happened to you tht day or actually write down the feelings it brough out? This diary is getting bland.

I just finished this diary entry and wow, I gotta say, it's hard to read sometimes. Not in a bad way, it just makes you feel so bad for Amnesia. But I'm still looking forward to the next entry! Good job. Maybe make them a bit more lengthy? Just a thought.

Oooh! This looks intriguing! I wonder if I'll have anything in common with this girl...?
Anyway, i hope that the other diary entries will be longer than this! Keep on writing!
-DarkAngelReviews