I really love this style, i once read a book very similar to this; it also used free verse instead of prose. this is great!

aaaugghh... So goood. I can feel what this chick is feeling man, and its not good :)

Sooo sad.

This is amazing! I can really relate to what your saying. Please publish more.

This is good. I look forward to finishing it. Well done and thank you for sharing this.

I really feel where this character is coming from. The writing is readable and flows nicely! Well written, good job! Glad that you aren't actually depressed or feel like this :)

I-is this actually h-hapening to y-you? PLEASE SAY IT ISN'T SO!