|Reviews for The Race|
| pvtsnowa 9/16/12 . chapter 2
Still not quite sure exactly what The Race is but you do keep it interesting. This episode was also kind of messy but there is real potential here. Keep it up, I'd like to see more.
| pvtsnowa 9/16/12 . chapter 1
Interesting but kind of jumbled and it doesn't really explain a lot about The Race. I would suggest trying to clean this up a little to set up the story better, it really just seemed like it was all over the place.