Very sexy! I especially loved the line "I'll rewrite your religion".

Nice. Love the word choice in this. I'm a sucker for poetic vocabulary (and really, in poems, having *exactly* the right word is crucial), so it's awesome when each one paints its own picture.

Love the imagery, too. My favorite, I think, is [i'll rewrite your religion, shatter your glass heart]. The image of a glass heart splintering into a thousand pieces is fantastic - so much more powerful than "my heart aches/bleeds for you, enter more gush here".

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love this

Like the previous reviewer, Florence and the Machine came to mind when I read this. I really enjoyed the last three lines; they had a certain sensuality to them.

This is really lovely! I particularly like the line with silk. By any chance have you heard Bedroom Hymns by Florence the Machine?