|Reviews for The Dark Guardian|
| fantasybookworm2012 3/21/13 . chapter 5
Just the seal thing but that mental image was unnecessary.
| fantasybookworm2012 3/21/13 . chapter 4
Why was she hiding under the table?
It was the necklace speaking I her wasn't it?
Your ping to make me throw my phone across the room in confusion.
| fantasybookworm2012 3/21/13 . chapter 3
Now some more I Cos's job(I guess.) makes sense.
Now constructive criticism as always.
The quotes and thoughts are extremely hard to diffentriate and they shouldn't be.
Maybe try italicizing the thoughts?
That may be just me but hats what ie always been taught about writing thoughts.
| Clear World 1/19/13 . chapter 5
awwwwwwe, all this build up and I don't get to see the fight until you update again.
I still look forward to this, but I just want to say, 'what was the chances she happens to get the one special necklace?'.
Still can't wait and really want to read what happens next.
| Guest 1/9/13 . chapter 3
Awesome! This is the first I have read of any of your works since I am kind of re-discovering this site(I was younger when I first stumbled upon it) and I will definitely check them out. Love the story so far!
| Clear World 1/9/13 . chapter 3
disappointed that there will be new update any time soon, but yay, Cos is turning out the way I have suspecting him to be. The tough guy with a heart of gold... or something like that.
Maria is still meh. She has her role and does it, but it's her character doesn't stand out to me nor have her actions.
| Tinker bell1122 1/4/13 . chapter 2
This chapter alone is amazing. I've been following your stories and poems and I think you are a really good writer and have a gift. When I read this chapter it ripped me to shreds but I also loved it. I can't wait to see what comes next. Keep up the good work!
| Clear World 1/4/13 . chapter 2
you need to update this more.
I'm curious what this demon hunter is.
Cos seems to fit well with the brooding man with a heart of gold character-type. Anyways, look forward to the next chapter... if u plan on updating.
Maria is... meh. I need something to happen before i can judge her.
| fantasybookworm2012 1/4/13 . chapter 2
Do people not know the correct spellin of "okay." ?
It is spelled "okay" not ok or O.K.
Those are abbreviations hat aren't correct. Please spell it correctly.
Now on to the actual story. I like it but Maria and Cos's conversation with "you irritate me."
Seems like something that friends would do not complete strangers.
| fantasybookworm2012 1/4/13 . chapter 1
When does this take place? Where? Is it up to the reader? Or simply unreversed as of yet? So far I like it.
| May B. Dreaming 12/6/12 . chapter 1
Words do not describe how epic that scene just was. Seriously, Cos is epical. Only one crit, on the grammar (because I found it helpful when someone told me): When you type dialouge, create a new paragraph.
(e.x.: "Hi, Joe." Bob said.
Joe smiled. "Hi, Bob, what's up?") It makes it easier on the reader to make sure that they don't skip any important (or awesome) dialouge, like much of what Cos said. ;D
But, overall, five stars!
- Sparta (hopefully, you know who that is)
| disneydreamer 9/18/12 . chapter 1
This is awesome! I love how it combines the actions of an old western movie, the characters of a video game or modern movie, and just normal everyday stuff that teens would say. I can't wait to read the next chapter!