This was so sad! T.T I cried rivers over here! But it was very good with a lot of hurt. Kai come back!
I never really go looking for sad stories such as this but I do find some I absolutely love and this is one of em now so thank you for writing it and putting more of your awesomeness in the world!

I really like this. It's short, but I like the characters. And jeez that was sad. This is the first thing I've read of yours and if there's a whole novel with these characters, (Vision?), is it possible I can read it? From what you've said in the A/N, it sounds good.
I will read some of your other short stories on this account, but yeah, really enjoyed reading this ficlet :)

I cried...

This story made me a little bit teary, I liked it but it also hurt to read, especially seeing as though I lost a friend to suicide today, though it was a good read and I am glad that I read it, keep up the good work.

when I read the part where Kais bro calls him to tell him Kais gone, I was mad at how the story had gone but then, at the end, even though its sad I really really like it. I like how the character gets to understand that even though Kai loved him, he was unhappy with the rest of his life. Im glad that he didnt resent Kai but understood his choice, that is true love, I guess. This is the first time Ive read someone writing something with an ending like this for a story with this topic. I like it, a lot

What. Happened?

I did not expect this! I'm bawling Caroline! :((

Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

xxx

AHSGEHDICHEVSC. GOD OF WRITINF, WHY HAVE YOU DONE THIS TOO NEE,? AFAGEVDHCIFJRJF. CRYING. YOU KILLED ME. I AM WITH KAI. HE IS HERE. HE IS WAVING. ABEHJCIVJRKCCOCKSM. CAROLINE DARLING, I LOVE OU.

This is so perfect. Please continue it?c:

I hope you decide to finish it. Its a good story.

I really love your stories and Kai's name...it's just undoubtedly sexy and charming and awesome!

:)

x Alyxandra