|Reviews for Body|
| auntcal 4/21/13 . chapter 9
Awesome fight scene with the Nature Giant. Very discriptiv
e and imaginative. You know who's up for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| AFireInside55 10/26/12 . chapter 1
Needs a lot of editing done (perhaps grab a Beta?) but the story seems interesting. Faved!
| auntcal 10/13/12 . chapter 6
Chapter 6 needs some spell check. That aside the story is heating up. Guess who I am waiting on now. Chapter 7 please.
| auntcal 10/6/12 . chapter 1
Awesome concept of a story and great collaboration. The only criticism is that there are some words that are spelled correctly, but are not the correct word for that sentence. Therefore, spell check won't find the errors. Otherwise, I enjoyed the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.