You are SO talented- the rhythm of all your poems, everything. It's so amazing. 3

This is so pretty. Just reading this and imagining it is calming. Keep up the amazing, beautiful work!

liked it, though the end is a bit abrupt- leave it as it is, though. i think it's complete in its present form. however, it would be interesting to see what you'd do with this if you expanded on it. looking forward to more form you!

It's very nice. I'm impressed that you were able to write that at such a young age. Keep writing poems and let the world know what you think through an artistic way.

This is amazing, especially considering when you wrote it.