I think this is really well written, I like the alliteration in the piece because I think it's cleverly done and I like the structure of it because we find out more with each line and your descriptions are beautiful. Great job :)

It's been awhile since I read one of your poems.

"staring at the droop
of a petal suddenly
changed to the word,

we kiss
again." Favorite lines. Love them. Really speaks to me for some reason.

I posted a new poem "Beyond the stars". Also "That Song Returns" If you don't mind reading and reviewing them. That would mean alot. Thanks.