|Reviews for Gods Heart is Breaking|
| Review 9/17/12 . chapter 1
I really like this. It's sad. People these days . . . The world is so messed up.
| Aniseed Meringue 9/15/12 . chapter 1
well...i liked the rhymes :)
| Angelissimo 9/15/12 . chapter 1
I think it's a sad yet lovely poem; however, there was a sudden change of perspective because at first, it was in God's words, but at the end, it became the words of the humans, and this change seems like it could make the flow a bit inconsistent. Still, good job!