That is the darkest of Dark Humor right there. Solar PDA, hahaha.
It shouldn't be that hard to delete the "paste document" thing, I wonder if the FP server is having issues with your stuff?
Either way, this internal monologue-ish thing is great, I can't wait for action to start!
Full on, "quotation around words" and 'soar and jump' action!

I see you used the CUT N PASTE feature for your story. Please cut that out, otherwise I won't be able to stop laughing.
What a terrible sense of humor.
Although cognitive joke function does tend to plummet in the onset of near-insomniac paranoia that is justified by the surroundings, in other words: I like this character and I will read on.

Diagnoses: screwed
apocalyptic animals
surviving the end
lonely path
better bring the shotgun
Hope that helped some:) & the story sounds interesting, I'd read it. Good luck.