Excellent! Please finish this story. Thank You

Another good chapter but REALLY need some answers. Thank You

Thank You for another great chapter. Looking forward to some answers...

Excellent chapter.

Excellent chapter...Thank You

"They were on a first name basis, being the only women in the CID, and hearing Janet use her title and last name made that Eve furrowed her brow." This has grammar issues.

I loved the cute little 'take that' to forensic procedural shows like CSI

Once again, another solid entry in your story. Happy to finally meet our protagonist. Keep up the great work. It's a highly enjoyable read.

You're such an amazing writer, I can't get over how great this is! So many details, and the morbid, gloomy atmosphere is just... really perfect! I also really love the English setting - I'm so used to American stories, it's good to see some variety. (: I'm definitely a fan of yours, keep it up!

Do you work in the criminal justice/forensics field?

Aaah, this is so good!

Wow! You're such a fantastic writer, I loved reading this!

I'm practically in the middle of nowhere right now, but I'm glad I still had Internet reception so that I could read this update. It's quickly becoming one of my favourite stories here on FP. :)

I'm liking this story. It's a bit dark and kinda gruesome I suppose, but you've definitely got my attention. :)

Great beginning! Nice place and atmosphere setting, can't wait for the next chapter :)

When I realized what was going on, I felt ill. Good job. You already know how I feel about your writing, and this chapter was as good as the last one. It was definitely very difficult to read at the end. Those trigger warning are not to be ignored.

Just a couple of things I was thinking:

I liked the paragraph where she was thinking about her funeral, but I thought the thing about her making a list of songs felt a little out of place. It might work a little better if it was placed somewhere else or written a little differently, but it seemed like a strange thing for her to think and then get followed up by her thinking about her parents.

I was a little confused at one point. He was touching her, and then later you say he closed the distance between the door and the bed, but it didn't look like he had ever moved away from her.

Typo in paragraph six. "It was the strange". Typo in paragraph ten. "Build out of solid wood"

Wow, great first chapter! Can't wait to read the rest of this :D

Wow, what a great way to open up a story. Your writing is tight and focused, and you have a compelling voice in your text. I really enjoyed the detached perspective from what is presumably the killer. It really set the atmosphere.