I love your writing.

I don't think I've understood this fully, I feel like there's something so much more complicated and deep about it. Still I enjoyed it, I just like the words of it, it was enjoyable to read, the words fit together really well. And I really liked the ending, there was just something good about it.

Lovely poem! You have a quirky style that I really enjoy. I love the sounds in 'heavenly elevens' and the contrast of 'i can't pray to any god, but, hell, i'll pray to that'. The ending was great too. Keep it up!