Interesting to say the least. I am sensing a bit of foreshadowing in this chapter, though I really don't have much to make a good prediction haha. Good job so far.

Sorry to say...it got bad...

Well this certainly is an interesting story. It well thought out and the characters are cool. There are some mistakes though, with the grammar.

Overall this is pretty good so far.

This is a truly great story! the situations, dialogue, the japanese name wordplay , it really feels like a story coming from an anime or manga! Love the characters already! I will keep following :D

Chapter 3 Review! Well, I don't know but why, but Eri always keep on reminding me of Chitanda Eru. And as for Tennin, nothing particular, for now. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter. I'm eagerly wanting to know Yuuma's past and Eri's previous life or whatyoumacallit. And love the part where Yuuma's looking for Eri, BTW. I laughed hard. Not bad, for a joke. "Yuuma, what are you doing? Yuuma! STAAAHP!"

Pico. LOL. Anyways, Chapter 2 Review! As it'll turn out soon that, this would become [SPOILER ALERT]! First, Eri the ghost, and now Tennin the angel. Not to mention the korean comic. The Bong Chong Dong Ghost. That also scared the heck out of me. Although, I only startled when I read it. Ok! Letting that aside, I'll be expecting for more chapters, that's that! Love Shiroao Yuuma. [Lovestruck]

Chapter 1 Review! As an Otaku and a rhythm gamer, I know most of your parodies. Anyways, the story's interesting in every way, because I could visualize the events without having a hard time. The plot's easy to understand but, viewers such as persons who doesn't love much Anime as we do, won't get those parodies. Thus, thinking that's normal? But, make that as your advantage, if you what I mean. I also like the characters. Shiroao Yuuma - Keima Katsuragi, Kyon, ans Shintarou Kirisagi while Niji Shohei - Sunohara Youhei. These are the characters that pops in my mind, as my first impression to them. Not to mention, Franz Liszt Acdemy and Area 7? He's one of those famous classical composers and the other one is- Yeah. One of those in a rhythm game, DJMax. Overall, it's a good start, the story's unique, and I know this would turn something "ecchi." But of course, I'll be only less ecchi, right?

I'm not very familiar with a lot of "anime" terminology so this was slightly confusing for me. I watch a bunch of it but 90% of the ones I watch are English, and if not, I don't bother to learn basic Japanese words haha. Just saying, nothing wrong with that but I don't think I would be included in your intended audience.

Based on what I read, I take it English is not your first language, correct? I just saw quite a bit of awkward sentences and guess that it's probably not your first language haha. Even so, your grammar is more or less spot on! Very good job so far!

Who could've though the chain messages were real hahaha

Nice idea by the way

Ghost?, long gray hair?, mmmmm... i have seen that before...

Good story, i dont have any complaints about it, just don't do too much ecchi U