|Reviews for Jade|
| CountryDiva101 12/18/12 . chapter 1
I like :)
| Long-live-MaxRide-TMI-TID-HP 10/26/12 . chapter 6
Short and sweet! Love it! Please keep update soon.
| tammycam 10/25/12 . chapter 1
OMG! Your only 12, its amazing girl! You did a wonderful job I love it espically the witch part!
| Long-live-MaxRide-TMI-TID-HP 10/26/12 . chapter 5
Please update soon! I love this!
| DarkBloodyMoon 9/19/12 . chapter 1
Its good i know im following but you dont have to make chapters too long like how this fine for me. Otherwise its okay that your young and its understandably (I'm only a year older than you starting writing at the beginning of the new year). I know if you fix a few things and put your all into it you'll have many more followers!
Best of luck and go cheering thing!
And don't be afraid to PM me!
| Marie Katrin 9/17/12 . chapter 1
Honey, your character needs some work. Research the term "mary sue." Many young writers start out writing Mary Sue's (I know I did) so don't feel bad. Practice makes perfect, so take the Mary Sue Litmus Test, re-work your character, and keep writing.