|Reviews for Lips|
| PureHeartsWait 9/22/12 . chapter 1
This is a very deep piece, I like it :)
| nothing rhymed 9/17/12 . chapter 1
an interestingly short-lived look inside a curious life.
your rich descriptions contrast the end's knowledge: what do we really know about her? nothing important. and it works so well with your entire concept. i feel like one of her sex/drug strangers, a partner but for a night, for a short simple dance.
i can't help hoping to meet again. this was a strong subject, subjective and as honest as anything else i've read in a while. great piece.