this is a wonderful and beautiful story, you are doing a great job. keep it up.

Ohgosh.. I was wondering if this was gonna happen..

Too lazy to log in.

Anyways.. wow dramaa

I liked this first chapter, although it was a big surprise the suicide thing... Anyway, I found in some sentences you mix different thoughts; for example: "It was the only way she could cope with that pain, by substituting physical pain to get rid of the mental pain." In here, you use "substituting physical pain" in a wrong place. :)

GOOD SO FAR but … well to make it ' young adults ' catorgri u have to Envolve sex and stuff like that so maybe u should write a 6 years later and make them have sex then - but right now it's a teen book - 14 year olds would suit this book but if u wanna make it a young adults book then it needs - fierce making out - sex and perhaps Lucy accidenty gets pregnant with Keith - just some advice but great book so far - Livy

D ADORABLE. I would date Nate. But im too old D

That's so sad! OMG! My one family member had tried commiting suicide and this book made me bawl! I loved it, tho.

I think.. I want to beat Linda with a STICK. Cheating. And he got beaten up. and UGH.

Anyways.

"After silence, that which comes nearest to expressing the inexpressible is music."
Aldous Huxley

Thoughts on what you did with the songs

I was a 14 year old Freshman. (

That guest review was me. I forgot I wasn't logged in. Lameness on my part.
Anyways, Love love love. Can't wait for more.(
Adore it so far

( Adored it. I know how that school thing goes..
ugh. School..

Thanks for the update. looking forward to chapter 14 p.

Um. Kiss scene please! Love

AWW! CUTE!. I loves it.

Love... I. wow. Great story

Firstly, let me just say the beginning of this story had me almost in tears. I felt incredibly sorry for Lucy and it really hurt to think about how others might be feeling the same.

Chapters 4, 5, 6 need paragraphs. They are too hard to read without them. I also think you use their names too frequently and it doesn't flow as well as it could. That probably sounds confusing but i guess it's just a pet peeve of mine.

Anyway i liked this story. I'll be honest and tell you that although i loved how they stuck up for her, i found some tactics a bit like bullying itself. Such as when Grace escorts Lucy to Spanish and Regan is complaining about a grade she got, when Grace starts 'standing up for lucy' it's got nothing to do with Lucy at all and frankly it had nothing to do with her bullying anyone else. I thought that it sounded kind of wierd considering they were supposed to be sticking up for their friend when really she was bullying somebody herself.

Now that i'm done rambling i will say Well Done and Thank You For Sharing. I liked reading this. Maybe if you wanted to improve the story you could add in some descriptions of each person's appearance? Just an idea.

Bye now. I'm gone. Lol.

Brooke

Please please PLEASE update! I love this story so so so so so so much!