It's good. I really liked the part where she manages use to her power! Update soon! I'll be following this story now!

This is great- really fun to read. Not only is your writing smooth and free of mistakes, you have created an interesting world with your descriptions.

I like the character of Terra. With a young but powerful character there is the risk of turning out to be a brat, but this wasn't the case here. She is funny and interesting to read about.

Anyway, I think this short piece hangs together very nicely with a clear plot and definieable, unique characters. I didn't think the ending of the story was weak at all. I'll be reading more of your works!

I'm sure about truly "strong", but your finishing paragraph was certainly fitting.

I thought this was a cute little story. I always wondered how difficult and frustrating it would be in real life to find magical talent like this. Well done.