|Reviews for Daisuke|
| Paige Terner 12/12/12 . chapter 4
UPDATE THIS NOW! I read it and I never used to like anime or whatever, but this is awesome!
I think you've converted me.
| Katsurou Shimizu 10/29/12 . chapter 1
Nice, this has the feeling of Natsume Yuujinchou over it in terms of subject material, though with a higher emphasis on cute humor rather than gentle pathos. Having been surrounded by stories focused on saving the world and epic battles, it's really refreshing to see something different.
I like Daisuke's characterisation (I have to keep reminding myself he's not that Daisuke in my story lol haha): He's naive, he's lazy, he likes to pretend to be suave but his failed attempts only make me smile. The gentle humor throughout the story is really natural, which brings me back to that Natsume comparison again. I'm looking forward to reading more (as soon as I am done with my revision :P).
Spotted a little spelling mistake 'eye site' should be eyesight.
| Hauchen 9/29/12 . chapter 2
Great chapter! I liked all of the new characters and I'm interested to see what will happen now that Daisuke's been told he can't be an exorcist. Also, I only spotted one mistake:
"More of less," said Itsuki.
Of should be or.
I really like this story, I'll be looking out for the next chapter!
| Hauchen 9/26/12 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. Daisuke's attempts to be a ladies man were really funny and it made me smile. One thing I did notice, however, was about these parts:
"those extra fifteenth minutes of sleep" and "She's about fifteenth years older than me".
Fifteenth should just be fifteen.
Keep it up though, I'm looking forward to more!
| Meipuru 9/21/12 . chapter 1
OMGOMGOMG! This story is sooooo awesome! D