I can see why you are having a hard time with continuing the story, but if you can, please continue.

WHAT. NO. YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME. YOU ARE THE MOST CRUEL PERSON EVER.

How could you stop this wondrous story? *sniff*

Oh well...I guess, if you didn't have any inspiration, it wouldn't turn out good :(

BUT HOW COULD YOU. EVIL...

EAM

hey your story is pretty cool!

how about looking at my story and please let me know what you think

thanks x

The chapter didn't suck at all! In fact, I really liked it :D
Ohhh Trevor. At least he decided to show up...
And now I am dreaming of warm, molten lava cake... oh yumm... ;)

Great chapter I love it! Good to hear from you

So he came to see her. Awww, that's so cute!
But how did he find her? Credit cards? Phone-gps? What kind of nerd is he? Or did she just tell him once that she wanted to go there some time?
Hope u update soon! Can't wait to read what they'll be saying to each other!

o.m.g you are amking me DIE with this cliffie! PLEASE update- im BEGGING you!

hey i just chanced upon this story, it seems good, but just one simple question, do you have an outline of the story? if you have, how long do you plan it to be? and also, do are you a regular updater, despite here you say that its been a while, i really want to know before i get more hooked into the story

Oh my gosh, I literally NEED the next chapter... I'M DYINGGGGGGG! I do have to thank you for not being one of those authors that leaves us on a major cliffhanger like Ari opened the door, and we don't know who's standing there. THAT would have literally killed me. I do hope there's some kissin' action in the next chapter *wink wink*. Anyway, FANTABULOUSLY AMAZINGLY SUPERTERRIFICLY GREAT AS USUAL YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER AND SURE I WILL GO CHECK OUT YOUR STORY BECAUSE YOUR WRITING KEEPS ME SANE JUST KIDDING I WAS SANE BEFORE READING YOUR WRITING BUT YOUR WRITING REALLY DOES MAKE ME HAPPY. Sorry for some reason when I give you review, I have the urge to write in caps to get my message across. Aaaaaaaaanyways, I think I said everything. So yeah. LOVE YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I LOVE YOU TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOO... PLEASE UPDATE... AGAIN... ARGH IM GONNA DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII IIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEE...
lilly
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEA SEPLEASE

I loved the chapter, but it was so short and you're leaving me hanging. I don't like being suspended in the air. Get the next chapter up ASAP!

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Ewwww, Collin sounds like a total perv :P Trevor, on the other hand, sounds HOT! I would love to date him :)
Wonderful story! I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes :)
Thanks for writing!
Truth

OMG! :O
Okay, AMAZING Chapter ;) It was exciting! And Trevors POV was great, it really seemed like him. If you know what I mean haha
Can't wait until the next chapter!

I knew it! i knew it! i knew it! I knew that trevor wrote that note as soon as is character was introduced! Now i feel sorry for his girlfriend but he has to break up with her. And may I just say wow, I did not think in a billion years that dad would get sober, nice, or engaged. Nice twist. I wonder what happens next!? That was really amazing. You did a really good job with Trevor's point of view. It was super exciting. And thank you, I love you too, hehe