|Reviews for The Long Lost Sister|
| Anji Roongta 12/23/12 . chapter 5
You know you can make that the witch has done some magic and made Vanessa forget her memory and made her young again for human eyes only for a few days or something and for names - Shaunee Erin you are so good that you will get ideas soon.
| Anji Roongta 11/23/12 . chapter 4
Hiii ,my last revie meant that i wanted you to update fast,because the story is interesting(my real name is anjali),and the story is very very nice.
| AJ Authors 11/4/12 . chapter 4
Very interesting. Children would really think that its just a short story but I guess it also has a good value. If you make more chapters then the children will much more enjoy. :)
| Guest 9/23/12 . chapter 1
The first paragraph confused me but after that it was fine.
| Anji Roongta 9/24/12 . chapter 3
WHAT'S NEXT?FAST PLEASE
| Archia 9/23/12 . chapter 2
Those seem like some pretty cool superpowers. I like the one where Ashley can change herself into other things, or people.
| Archia 9/22/12 . chapter 1
That's an interesting idea. I'm curious to know more about this Janessa and her puzzling age.
Just a technical thing. Whenever's there's a new speaker, it should be on a different line. So for example.
"Where's my present, Sugar?" Janessa asked, tearfully.
"Aww, don't cry, here," I rummaged around my bag and found a tiara and a princess mirror.
So apart from that, this seems interesting. I think the plot idea is great and it makes me want to know more about how it all works out. And Ashlee seems like an interesting character being able to fancy stuff like turning herslef into a fairy.