I liked it. Very good for one of your first poems. I can relate to that feeling.

I liked it. It's where I went with my old elementary school friends. Yes, my current (and few) friends are people who I didn't go to school with until I entered middle school (except for one, we met in fifth grade), but they're AWESOME.

I hope everything goes better if you and your friend are in those temporary fights. If it's been something for a long time, still hope something gets better.

-Hermie