Really interesting. I'm procrastinating like crazy and I have a huge paper due tomorrow, otherwise I would finish the rest of the story right now. But until such time as my mind is unburdened, it will have to rest in my Favorites folder, undisturbed.
I like you characters. A lot of stories I read have really MarySue-ish characters, but yours sound very promising. Good job.

Ooh, do I sense some romance budding between Kevin and Berlin?

Hm, so they all had the same dream, eh? But, if Berlin's any indication, they're not all going to admit to it. I wonder what the heck's going on! I can't believe they all just returned to their daily lives after that. I wonder how Sasha and Josh are doing; those two are the ones that took the most damage in the fight, right? And what're people saying about Neal being dead?

The dialogue in this chapter was also really great, by the way.

Wow, things sure got intense fast. I'm still wondering how they even got there. Poor Neal. I like Lee a lot so far.

Hope to read more soon!

Ooh, this looks really interesting so far. I'm wondering what on earth happened to them. The pep rally scene was so fun! But now we've got a dead body. Yikes.

This is so well-written; it's easy to follow. I'm excited to read more.