|Reviews for Water|
| Jun Li Kanashii 1/13/13 . chapter 1
Well paced. I like it. MAKE MORE.
| Naver 11/5/12 . chapter 1
Great job! I like the metaphors, they complete the poem! :)
| Flaming Sun of Illusions 9/30/12 . chapter 1
I love the message. "Enjoy life while it lasts." Some people need to do that, and this poem gets the message across in a... poetic way. I know, dumb adjective since it is a poem, but I really enjoyed it, even though I normally hate poetry. Keep up the good work!
| Owlwhisper 9/26/12 . chapter 1
It's really good! Very discriptive!
| Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know 9/24/12 . chapter 1
Great job, wonderful imagery :)