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| Reviews for Water |
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   Jun Li Kanashii 1/13/13 . chapter 1Well paced. I like it. MAKE MORE. |
| Naver 11/5/12 . chapter 1 Great job! I like the metaphors, they complete the poem! :) |
| Flaming Sun of Illusions 9/30/12 . chapter 1 I love the message. "Enjoy life while it lasts." Some people need to do that, and this poem gets the message across in a... poetic way. I know, dumb adjective since it is a poem, but I really enjoyed it, even though I normally hate poetry. Keep up the good work! |
| Owlwhisper 9/26/12 . chapter 1 It's really good! Very discriptive! |
| Emptiness-Is-All-You-Know 9/24/12 . chapter 1 Great job, wonderful imagery :) |
