I have to say. You have some skills.
I'm going to be perfectly honest with you and say that for 97% of the time reading this, I was furious. I loved Miki/Mika (?) but hated Ryu and Ryan with a passion. The way dragons own females was sickening to me and I was pretty ticked off. Some of the events that happened? I was worn out by the end; reading and then raging about it.
But hear me out. I will say it again. You have skills. EPIC skills.
You got me to feel for this story. I felt connections with each of the characters (good, bad, middle, etc). If an author can make you love or hate a character with so much passion, then that author has done one hell of a good job. You've done well to make me keep reading and cheer on the female protagonist (who is pretty darn strong). I had so many feelings while reading this.
So sorry if you're taking this the wrong way! it's hard to put this into words but what I mean is that despite everything, I have an enormous amount of respect for you. You've written with such passion, flair and emotions that it's hit me pretty hard. I have a feeling you'll become a more fantastic writer and I'll see this story in stores someday. Good luck to you! Keep writing! Never lose sight of your dream!

You. Are. Amazing! I positively loved this and your work was a big inspiration! I really hope you wright more!

I love it. It's one of the best stories I've ever read.

How the hell is it THE END? They have a good eight thousand years ahead of them! I'm inlove with this story!

Wait. Over already? But... But... T.T I have been reading this from the very beginning. It's nice. Saved me from a few hours of boredom. But... I think it could have lasted a bit more for your fans sake . But I guess I can't for nothing about it. Anyway. Zeus is married to Hera. Athena is their daughter... Since Hear is the goddess of marriage and
family, I thought I would be more... Fitting.

Thanks for the Story o/

Okay, you got me. I laughed at that last part. That's a great question Miku, why didn't anyone come to see why you were screaming? xD

Hm, the title intrigued me so I decided to stroll on in. You have a very good understanding of grammar, and you start off with the classic waking up from recurring dream scenario. It builds up with the introduction of the friends and family of the main protagonist, and works to at least initially characterize who we are introduced to. By that standard, you did an excellent job for an opening chapter. One last thing, I love the idea of a glossary. That's actually a pretty good idea since some readers would not normally understand that terminology. I will read on.

Of, if possible, would you mind possibly stopping by to read my story, "Synchronizer?" and reviewing it too?

I love it!