Oh wow, you're right about the story getting a lot better. I really wasn't expecting that. Such a sad chapter :(

Epic chapter. Love the ending :)

Epic! I found it funny how General Fitzpatrick was sick to his stomach when they were dissecting the body. They thought Scalpel was too young at first, but he proved them wrong! :D

I really like it :) will look forward to reading further chapters

Laura Tear.

Ah, I see that you finally link things together. Wonderful! I can't wait to learn more about the Red Umbrella and how it still threatened Walker right after she found Falcon.

I love CERBRO's cluelessness at the start of the chapter about Teressa. I know this story probably isn't really meant to be a romance and it all seems just like CERBRO to have followed orders rather than go to the dance, but I can't help feeling really sorry for Teressa. It's probably for the best though. It may be kind of odd if her and CERBRO's relationship did progress seeing as CERBRO's still part robot. I loved the last line of this chapter. It made me sad.

Wonder what that smell is.

I really liked this chapter. Ever since CERBRO snuck into Thanatech things have been great. I mean this story is already amazing as is, but just wow. Keep up the great work! :D

Oh my, talk about a cliff hanger. I need to read on :O

I really liked the Luther fight scene.

I remember when I read this line, "Humans are easily impressed by spectacular sceneries of nature" I really believe it to be true. Even if something in nature can seem so simple a lot of people, myself included will be amazed by it :)

I'm curious what will happen to CERBRO now that he's out for the first time. He's bound to encounter more situations that even his computer brain won't fully understand.

Great chapter! :D

Great chapter! I see that you finally return to the frame story. And another good cliffhanger. Good job.

I'm on the second chapter now, and it is definitely worth it to continue reading...