|Reviews for Stain|
| stephayyyy 9/26/12 . chapter 1
This is extremely beautiful, and you really employ imagery effectively. "Disappointment that beats so steadily in the heart it gets tattooed onto the inside of a person's chest until they can feel the sadness. Until they feel so heavy from this inward-collapsing-sternum-feeling that they're practically falling backwards instead of ever walking forward."
There are many great lines within this piece, but this, by far is my favorite.