OMG THIS IS PERFECT. I LOVE IT. IT COMPLETELY REMINDS ME OF CATCH-22 HAHA. BUT...WOW. I UNDERSTAND WHY YOU LIKE THIS. I DO TOO AHAHA. IF ONLY I COULD WRITE STUFF THIS DEEP. . SERIOUSLY MAN. BESTEST YET. WELL, WITH TIME GAME. ANNNND IMOFF TO READ MORPHINE BUTTERFLY, YOUR ATTEMPT AT ROMANCE TEEHEE

...Okay, nicely written with endearingly strange metaphors and decently paced, but I gotta ask, what's with the pony cover?! It's just...there. I almost thought I'd find some MLP fanfiction...Oh, is that your profile avatar? Huh.
Misleading, much?
Either way, good job!