I like the story so far! It wasn't too long ago when I heard of Slendy for the first time, but I can say that I have played a game of slender and I literally slammed my laptop closed and screamed into a pillow when his face popped up amongst the static (I was playing it at three am, or ese I probably would have just screamed without the pillow...)
Okay, back on topic... I thought it was a good story, and I hope you upate it soon! ;D

Woah creepy... You need to update soon!

Wow that was good. Your really good with adding details.

Spooky!
can't wait for more: )

I like it. I've always been a fan of the tall man or slender man whatever you call him. I'll stick around and see what happens...

Oh, ominous. Dialogue and interactions are what really stand out here.
Okay, okay, you got me I'll stick around to see what else is happening.