Love the drive and determination radiating from this poem. It's a strong message, very powerful. Well written!

Well this is certainly a thought provoking. You wonder what they're trying to prevent. it could be anything but I like to think of it as a big brother trying to stop his little sisters from giving into the nightmares. It's just what came to mind when thinking about this.

I really like the determination in the second sentence because it suggests that the speaker will do anything even if it kills them. Also the word "will" is again reinforcing the determination of the speaker. Also the speaker seems very protective/possessive of subject ("her"). I wonder why.

Very thought provoking and very strong. I like it :)

Reading this makes me think. It just does.