The concept behind this story seems to be very interesting, and I think you've achieved your goal of making it easy for the reader to visualize with such descriptive details.

I like how you take into consideration everything down to little things, like explaining the precise lay-out of the carts on the train.

As well, crash and the others seem quite fun to learn more about.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Oh wow, this was short. Still confused lol, but hopefully when you post some new chapters it'll clear things up!

A tad confusing at first, but I think things will clear up in later chapters.