| Reviews for A Folding Universe |
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Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 10This poem made me think of all the situations I've been in and thought the same exact thing. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 9The merit behind these words are unbelievable. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 8Samuel Taylor once said, "Prose is words in their best order, but poetry is the best words in their best order." This poem is an amazing example of that. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 7Again, with the amazing emotion. Everything is just perfect. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 6The words this is constructed out of are powerful, and the way you have written them make them even stronger. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 5Wow, you really know how to tie emotion into you're poetry don't you? |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 4I love poems like this. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 3Quite interesting. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 2Confusing, but isn't all poetry. What makes this poem great, is when someone reads it they can feel the underlying emotion. |
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 1Beautifully written. |
RedemptionIsOverrated 11/3/12 . chapter 10Lovely. |
Skyward Ending 11/3/12 . chapter 3I think this is my favorite out of the ten that you have written so far. There's a feel about it that rings a sad chord in me, like something's missing. I also liked your line breaks. |