Reviews for A Folding Universe
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 10
This poem made me think of all the situations I've been in and thought the same exact thing.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 9
The merit behind these words are unbelievable.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 8
Samuel Taylor once said, "Prose is words in their best order, but poetry is the best words in their best order." This poem is an amazing example of that.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 7
Again, with the amazing emotion. Everything is just perfect.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 6
The words this is constructed out of are powerful, and the way you have written them make them even stronger.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 5
Wow, you really know how to tie emotion into you're poetry don't you?
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 4
I love poems like this.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 3
Quite interesting.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 2
Confusing, but isn't all poetry. What makes this poem great, is when someone reads it they can feel the underlying emotion.
Wannabe101 12/22/12 . chapter 1
Beautifully written.
RedemptionIsOverrated 11/3/12 . chapter 10
Lovely.
Skyward Ending 11/3/12 . chapter 3
I think this is my favorite out of the ten that you have written so far. There's a feel about it that rings a sad chord in me, like something's missing. I also liked your line breaks.