Very well written although you had a 1 mistake that I noticed. When the West Ghost was speaking to him you wrote "Come down my path and see awaits you. You should put What in the middle of see and awaits but, I think you meant to put it but just forgot.

Awwwww what a touching poem and it also holds a true message that we must face very welll done I am impressed x3

Beautiful story. Well written and a positive theme. Good job!