|Reviews for The Uncharted Island|
| jakbnimble 12/9/12 . chapter 6
You are seriously talented! I still can't believe you came up with the idea for this story on a whim. Thank goodness for boredom!
I don't really think I'd be a lot of assistance to you, but I'll PM you sometime this week with an idea of where I thought you were going with the story, and maybe that will get you out of your rut. :D
| jakbnimble 11/16/12 . chapter 5
We are patient folk, so don't stress about your updates. :-) Good luck on your exams!
As always, brilliant chapter!
| jakbnimble 10/27/12 . chapter 4
My heart was pounding there at the end! I actually felt my skin growing warmer with fear for poor Wes. Oh. My. Goodness!
One of my favorite lines from this chapter: "...crystals that dotted the dark blanket of night..." Beautiful!
| jakbnimble 10/7/12 . chapter 3
I squealed like a giddy little girl when I got your update alert. LOVE your description here! Great introduction to the island. Can't wait to see what else is waiting for Wes.
| jakbnimble 10/2/12 . chapter 2
Very cool chapter! You're an expert at personification. Looking forward to exploring the island!
| jakbnimble 10/1/12 . chapter 1
Ah, Drivers Ed... The class where imaginations often run wild. :-)
This seems like it could really go somewhere. Interested in seeing where you take it. I wouldn't worry too much about chapter length - just end them where it feels appropriate and you'll be fine.