Wow, I love your story so far. It's very detailed and progresses well. There are a few grammatical errors, but nothing major. Keep writing! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :D

Dayum we good.

First: I need to tell you that I remarked that sometimes you write an action and you describe how you view it from Cyril position then you rewrite the same action but from Oliver's position. I think that it will be best to if you can describe the same action from both position in the same time.

Second: a school that stay open till 2 am? Okay, but normally there should be a lot of light around it. I'm just saying.

I like this chapter, update ASAP.

Good start but I'm wondering why would he choose to do night classes.

Continue the good work.