|Reviews for The Good Times|
| Swallow-tailed Kite 10/3/12 . chapter 1
I don't really think the people you named as the 'leaders' of this new age would be really suitable. Why not make up your own OCs? :o
Seems pretty cool, though a tad feminist, but I suppose that's the problem your protagonist is going to solve ;] Wonder why world population wouldn't increase though, with no sickness and stuff, unless the number of babies each year is carefully controlled.
Seems a nice place to live in the future (apart from the men and dangerous-animals-are-kept-underground bit)
| Ophelia Schmit 10/2/12 . chapter 1
Interesting, exciting story, but the three female characters you used seemed unlikely. Why not become more original and create your own characters? Otherwise, your story is great.