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Reviews for
The World Beyond The Castle
Swallow-tailed Kite
10/3/12 . chapter 1
Some paragraphs could be merged together a bit, '...' doesn't need the space in between each stop
Swallow-tailed Kite 10/3/12 . chapter 1