I absolutely loved this. I will favorite this.

Ahem, your poems tend to incorporate insanity, which is very fun to read about. Keep it up, Silver!

Happy writing, friend
-sapphire

Haha, I like this, very creative. My only critique would be that the Seven, eight stanza has more syllables than the others so it doesn't flow as well as the rest of the poem. The other lines are all very effective though, a nice mix of humor and horror.