|Reviews for Year of the Mermaid|
| Aoishitsuji 12/10/12 . chapter 11
:( Why Kyle? WHY? When Sam isn't around, you never feel like you want to go out with that biiitch! Now suddenly you want to go on a date with her? Why? To hurt Sam? Betty, please kick Kyle where the sun doesn't shine. Sam should give him silent treatment, or maybe he should get a new friend and make Kyle jealous. Please update soon 33
| Fumiki 11/17/12 . chapter 11
You're an idiot, Kyle. It's simple, really, don't go out with Lisa. She's not worth it. . Poor Sam, I hope he'll have fun with Betty. That's right Betty, no cupcakes for Kyle! Even Chalie likes Sam more Kyle lol XD Also I hope the date doesn't go well. He'll regret it, not spending the day with Sam.
Anyway thanks for the fast update! You're awesome, can't wait to read more!
| Fumiki 11/14/12 . chapter 10
NO KYLE WHAT ARE YOU DOING? DON'T DATE HER!
I hope something happen so Kyle doesn't have to go. Or... maybe he should brings Sam along. Oh god. Betty, please knock some sense into his head! Poor Sam. And he forgot to call again! D:
Calling Kyle with other character's name is a sign that you need to write more of this story.. lol. So, please update soon!
| Nintendo Fan 101 11/5/12 . chapter 2
As stated in the 1st chapter, Sam was 4 years old. In this chapter, they saw each other 12 years later. You also wrote that Sam was in college. So just how many more years was Kyle older than Sam?
| Nintendo Fan 101 11/5/12 . chapter 1
Does it mean that Sam gets legs when he is on dry land?
| manga23freak1995 10/18/12 . chapter 7
Love the story! ;) I hope you keep writing. :)
| Third Reviewer 10/12/12 . chapter 6
"Sticks tongue out"
If something happens to my men, I'll smack thee. In da face!
Lol, awesome chapter! Crap, I was hoping to avoid characters like Betty. Eh, I guess they make the story better. Sometimes. I loved the interaction between the boys in the chapter. Ha! I can imagine Sam watching something like Jaws!
Awwww! I loved Sam's reaction to the city. I bet he looked adorable!
Crap, gotta go! Bye, and Merry Writing!
| TurquoiseLove 10/11/12 . chapter 1
i'd like to point out though, that in your description you say 'mermaid'. if he is a guy it should be 'merman'. maid is a term for a woman, or girl. It would also make it a little more obvious that he story is slash.
just a suggestion :)
| Third Reviewer 10/9/12 . chapter 5
Oh, you updated. Another awesome chapter! Yay, Sam gets to live with Kyle!
Alright, what are you going to do to Sam? Get him lost in the city? Kidnapped? Bankrupt? DON'T DO THIS TO US! Surely something horrible's going to happen! And what about Sam's family? What happened?! Maybe it has to ring... Or maybe the ring symbolizes how much he loves Kyle!
Ok, that was cheesy, but the idea's adorable, right?!
| Third Reviewer 10/8/12 . chapter 4
"Gapes" Dude. Two reviews? Seriously?! This story is great and it only got two reviews? Wow.
I guess I'll try to fill in the void.
Well, I really like this story. I find it cute how curious Sam is, and his reactions to everything are very similar to mine. I also imagine that Sam would be a really attractive boy. It'd be amazing to see such radiant red hair. I think you do a good job writing the characters, and the story in itself! I love Kyle's character, though. He's very chill and seems to be kind of protective over Sam, which I find very cute. I will admit that his character doesn't have a lot of uniqueness, but we're just starting! We'll find out his flaws, quirks, and pet peeves as we go on! I was kind of hoping that Sam would be jealous of Mara, but I was denied that enjoyment, "pout."
Any suggestions to help fix the story... I really don't have that much to say. Your writing seems slightly elementary (I hope that didn't sound rude!) but I think that's because of how fluffy and innocent this story is. But I love the innocence; it's a breath of fresh air from so many other stories.
That's all I really have to say other than I hope you can update soon, and Merry Writing!
(P.S- Congrats, this story is now written in my Notes app, so I will be checking this story ever so often!)
| partie traumatic 10/5/12 . chapter 3
I like what you've written so far and am excited to read more.
| Crystales 10/3/12 . chapter 1
Lovely, I don't think anyone's done this before :) keep up the great work!