Nice follow up up chapter. It maintains that air of mystery and intrigue. I, for one, would like to see what happens next in this story. The mystery of the characters and their intersecting storylines is something I look forward to seeing unveiled.

Really good opening chapter here. I like the suspense that you were able to capture within the scene. It read as smoothly as an opening movie scene would have looked. The direction definitely made me want for more. Nice work.