this is beautiful. simply, very simply, beautiful. 3

This has a strong voice and it gives a good impression of character and personality. Not to mention it's a philosophy I strive to live by.

I'm going to join you! This is quite cool! Goodluck!

Wow. You have an amazing writing style! I love everything about this!

I read the first two chapters now. The first one was somewhat more philosophical, the kind I like to read the most.
The second was just weird, but good and fun to read.
I'll continue to read what else you've got :)

I'm very impressed by both the quality and quantity of your work. - JJ

Liked it. Though I would like a sense of the terrain she was in when she hid from the sound.

You tell much story in a very tight format in this one.