:D damn i wasn't interest in this kind of story but hell you caught me. you better update soooooooon because i'm going to reach chapter nine very sooooooon.

You deserve a whole box of cookies..LOL!

I love it! The best story I have ever read! Please continue, I am literally on my knees right now. (Actually am) great job

Wow. This is so interesting. You really did a good job. Have a cookie.

I love this story so far! It is the best I have read so far. I cannot believe how you made this! I read this story multiple times so far and I just started fictionpress a couple days ago! I am also Pink Pasta Piano, which I am sure I reviewed last night! Love it!

So Paul? I like him, he's nice, honest, loyal and obviously attractive. Hope she won't mess it up too much. I'm not looking forward to seeing her on the ground begging for forgiveness. And I'm not looking forward to her few real friends realizing they have been played. Hopefully she'll stop in time before everything goes down, especially her friendship with Paul...
As I said before: CAN'T. WAIT.

Chocaholic much? May you end up FAT.
;)

Here, ( ) have a cookie ;-p

Right now I'm feeling most sorry for Dani. With Felicia ignoring her and not visiting, she's got to be both lonely and worried, especially if she does have an inkling of what Felicia is up to.

And it looks like things are going to hit the fan shortly, hopefully in Felicia's and Dani's favor.

Can't wait for the next chappy :-)

WOW. Great chapter as always!
Can't wait to read more.

Sweetheart, I love you for posting these long, error-free, detailed and reading candy chapters; I'll forgive the damn days you DON'T post (I'm kidding, but seriously, that's depriving the world, which has me in it, of your talents), just keep at it TTwTT
With all the love I can muster for someone who's reality is debatable. 3

AMAZING chapter :D Thanks for such a long one! Definitely makes up for the wait haha ;)

Bored? You must be joking :-)

I just keep wondering how, if Paul is anywhere near as intelligent as he seems, he can seem so oblivious or at least uncaring to the bullying going on, or if he truly just doesn't care so long none of it is pointed at his precious sister.

Don't worry, we'll be patient. One of the problems of reading a first-person story is that we can't get into the other characters heads as much as we'd want to. That doesn't mean it isn't any less delicious.

haha i seriously forgot how much i loved this story! updat soon :D

Yummm milk duds... haha
Good chapter ;)

So far this is an amazing story! I don't have a lot of patience but I'm happy to make an exception this time. Eager to see what will happen next and what plans Felicia will come up with. Great work! Next chapter please :D

Wow. Great chapter!
And poor Laurie! Lets just hope she won't do anything drastic now that the bullying will be concentrating on her. Else Felicia will be bearing the guilt for this. Placing a lit joint in Brittany's locker sure was an evil move.
And I wonder whether Paul has realized by now what game Felicia is playing.
Bad thing is I don't remember Jake, so I might have to reread the other chapters to know how far he is involved.

Anyway, your story gets more and more fascinating, and I especially like the narrating style you use. It's funny and full of sarcasm and humor. Plus (and this always makes me envious) your vocabulary is pretty rich.
Can't wait for the next chapter!