So i read a LOT of your stuff, like, everything... and youve ALREADY written the most sickening, vulgar, beautiful and POWERFUL poetry on this whole site! I can't believe this is some of your first poetry, it's enough to make you puke and cry at the same time!

The line about the thin dick makes me think of my guy friends saying to each other "would you rather have a 2 inch really thick one, or ten inches and pencil thin?" Hahaha. :)